zeno zeno ... what can i say ... i LOVE it! simple and straight forward but it got something special together with the melody. i just love the last sentence ... fits so well with the melody epsecially on 再遠一些一些. THANKS and BIG HUGZ!! Now, just to be a little picky, not too sure about 這夜晚 and 功課. is there anything that is a little more interesting than 這夜晚? If you feel strong about "night", maybe there's other better word than 夜晚 (e.g. 晚上). As of 功課, it sounds a little too college ... Other than that i really the mood of the lyrics!
arigatou~~~!! was a bit worry about the lyrics this time coz i was sick last weekend... cannot sing when i wrote words -_____-"" below is my opinion about 這夜晚 and 功課 夜晚 vs 晚上. i would go for 夜晚 compared to 晚上 simply becoz the note does not match 晚上. of course i will see if i can find sth better to put on; 功課sounds a little too college... yes it does. Since your music is pretty urban, and i think your audience includes not only ppl who works but also ppl who studies. Anyhow i dont mind to change homework to sth else if u want~~ again... give me some time pls~~~
zeno zeno ... what can i say ... i LOVE it! simple and straight forward but it got something special together with the melody. i just love the last sentence ... fits so well with the melody epsecially on 再遠一些一些. THANKS and BIG HUGZ!! Now, just to be a little picky, not too sure about 這夜晚 and 功課. is there anything that is a little more interesting than 這夜晚? If you feel strong about "night", maybe there's other better word than 夜晚 (e.g. 晚上). As of 功課, it sounds a little too college ... Other than that i really the mood of the lyrics!
ReplyDeletearigatou~~~!!
ReplyDeletewas a bit worry about the lyrics this time coz i was sick last weekend... cannot sing when i wrote words -_____-""
below is my opinion about 這夜晚 and 功課
夜晚 vs 晚上. i would go for 夜晚 compared to 晚上 simply becoz the note does not match 晚上. of course i will see if i can find sth better to put on;
功課sounds a little too college... yes it does. Since your music is pretty urban, and i think your audience includes not only ppl who works but also ppl who studies. Anyhow i dont mind to change homework to sth else if u want~~
again... give me some time pls~~~